This is my first draft of my trailer "Ivy Wood", I needed to make changes such as editing sound and music volume and add title cards.
This is my second draft of my trailer "Ivy Wood" I have recieved feedback on this draft and noted changes that need to be made for my final piece.
+Music changd narrative perspective
+Appreciate Matt dressed as a woman
-Smack: needs non-diegetic sound
-Spelt 'whose' wrong
-Song dips to early on title card 'OMG'
+Appreciate Matt dressed as a woman
-Smack: needs non-diegetic sound
-Spelt 'whose' wrong
-Song dips to early on title card 'OMG'
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